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Originally Posted by Missus Catastrophe
Oh, damn. That was good. Hmm.
New challenge:
An awkward young man has always been unable to feel emotions. He feels empty inside. He searches and searches for what's missing in him. He is absolutely frantic with the fact that he just isn't like other people. One day he stumbles upon a girl who is what he feels should be perfect for him. He fakes emotions day-by-day and finally, he thinks he has found love. When he goes to tell the girl, she breaks up with him, informing him it's just too soon and she's not ready. He feels tightness in his chest and his body hurts. He thinks this is sadness, a broken heart. He yells that he loves her and HNNNNNNGGGGGHHHH!! He was wrong. It was just a heart atttack.
Let's see what you can do with that. C:
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Within me have I always felt
devoid of life
Hollow and empty without soul
I feel nothing
There must be somthing horribly
wrong with me
There must be somthing vital missing
deep inside me
I thought for at time that she
would solve this
A perfect match for me
inside and out
I pursued her as the books
showed me how
Day in and day out I put up
a great act
And finally it seems time to tell her
how I feel
But in that moment all falls down
all around me
Too fast, too soon, not ready
she tells me
Within me an ach begins pulling
inside my chest
With a sob I cry out those three little words
I love you
Praying the pain will lessen and
the sadness lift
Insted it gets stronger, knocking me
to the ground
And in these final moments I understand I've
never felt anything
and without feeling a heart simply can
not go on