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Old 02-22-2012, 08:53 AM

You guys are amazing! I love your stories. It is really tough to write a whole story in just 100 words. It always makes me really weigh what I want to say and how to cut out any extras that I don't need. This exercise has actually helped me learn how to edit better.

Wow, I just read some of the stuff I've been writing lately and it is really really dark. Sorry for the depressing works.
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Stars fell from the sky and burned the ground dead. A long time ago this used to by a thriving city filled with life, love, and people. They were happy for a time, until jealousy, hate, and loneliness crept into their souls like fungus. People became distrustful. Squabbles and petty thievery began. Eventually their desires morphed into the wars they wanted. After a long time, when they no longer knew why they fought, they became afraid of what life would be like without chaos and pain. They launched the bombs. One after another. Until the stars fell from the sky.

Last edited by fishyfey; 02-22-2012 at 08:56 AM..