That's good! I almost heard the music as you described the feelings it was invoking. You do converstions well, not choppy like I have seen other writers do in short stories.

Not much I'm working on at the moment. I have a fanfiction going on between my character and Flash and a few rps. Other than that, something pops in my head and I write it down :P

Are you going to go farther with that story, or is it going to stop there?