07-19-2015, 04:16 PM
Wow, that's actually a lovely start. Maria mentioned already the first thing that popped into my head which is the outline.
You seem to have a good grasp on how shading works, but the shading seems very blunt in comparison to the dress itself, so I think you might need more shades in between? (I haven't looked at it in detail yet, so this could just be the particular pallet.)
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