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Originally Posted by Kat Dakuu
I really liked this. It's cute, but wrenches on the heart at the end. The only grammar mistake I noticed was in the first line, there should be a comma curtains and rousing. Otherwise, it's well written. They look like characters I'd be interested in reading more about. You should try to continue it.
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Thank you for noticing the error, I'll correct it! And yeah I'm going to try and write more of it in the near future now that I have the summer off. I can message you it bit by bit if you'd like to read more?