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Old 01-23-2012, 05:47 AM

Rozalyne~ Dreams are strange sometimes. You were thorough about depicting the environment and what was going on. The scenes flowed into each other and weren't choppy. I found it interesting how many people secretly came together at random to see a natural wonder and for an authoritative force try to stop and contain the people. The girl's speed and fast forwarding time to an unknown, yet familiar place. Before she becomes lost someone she knows brings her back and we return to what happened in the beginning. Very interesting. I enjoyed it. :) You should continue to post in this forum.