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Kat Dakuu
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Old 04-27-2013, 02:27 AM

Scenes
Must actually be a scene. follow the blurbs and I would prefer at least some bg elements and color if possible. I can ALWAYS give additional info you might need.

Declan and Koda's First Kiss-
Declan is a private tutor and Koda is his student. They're in the middle of the dining room or some such place inside. There is a 7 or 8 inch height difference between them. You can read the awesome scene here. The kiss came about because of a bet, and both are so freaked out the day leading up to the kiss.

Gary and William Snuggling under a blanket during a storm-
Gary loves storms and has admitted to himself that he likes the idea of snuggling with a lover during one. William is terrified of storms. a cozy and cute type scene.

Derek shoving Jarred against a wall-

Jarred does not like cops, so even though he's consulting for cop Derek, he decides to make a run for it. After getting shot at, then tackled to the ground, Jarred gets shoved face first into the wall of a house still under construction, one arm twisted behind his back. I think Jarred enjoyed it. If you wanna look at the scene, it is somewhere around here (to about post 123)

Derek and Jarred sparring?!-

I'm not even going to try to put in words what I want. I have no sort of image in mind. Just...something you can make from this scene here (post 288 to 309ish). Warning: m/m action!

Juka sitting on Chi-
Just a random moment in the life of Indirect Falsehood's vocalist and guitarist. This is before they start the fake relationship which leads the real relationship! Read the scene here

Jex and Ashton bond-
This is the first time they meet and they are in a hot springs taking part in the lifebringing ceremony along with all the other angels and demons of the city, so yes, the pool is very large and set in the valley between mountains. They are mostly naked, but I'm sure the important bits are covered in some way, but I'm lazy to say how...so yeah, water. it's midnight. Here is the scene, unfortunately on google docs again. This is a NaNoWriMo novel, so view the unedited rushed scribbles without a critical eye. I can always clarify details I may only think I wrote into the story.

The kiss with emotion
Gary and William kissed for the first time since the beginning, this time it was the kind of kiss born from love, not lust. The scenes takes place after a fight during their 'date'. Emotions are running high and Gary chooses to tell William why he never has relationships. They are in Gary's car (if you want, I think Wings of Writing knows exactly what car he drives). The scene starts here but you can start reading earlier because the scene is epic epicness. Ends around post 1402.

Jex and Ashton at the fire fields
They boys are back and on the first official date! I think all of the details necessary to know the setting are there and all that jazz. I can give specific references to what they're wearing in this scene if you want. So here it is! the scene

Last edited by Kat Dakuu; 08-25-2013 at 06:00 PM..