08-04-2009, 01:57 AM
@ Faggotory Fun: You got it right! ^^
I like your haiku, but, isn't the second line supposed to be seven syllables? o.o
@ Shtona: You have succeeded at making it difficult... I'm probably going to get this WAY off. >.<
My brain's frying... D8
Uhhhh... Is it from the Moon's POV, talking about Earth and.... hum. The 'others' it refers to... would one be the sun...?
Gah, I'm sorta bad at this. =.=
Nice poem you wrote~ :3
Rising, falling,
Chanting, calling,
Melodies float along,
Sighing, Crying,
Twisting, persisting,
Notes follow the song.
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