Nah it's coo 8D So here's second draft-- if this one also doesn't work, would you mind redlining for me so I know exactly how bulky I should go with the hoodie? I assuuumed that was what you meant but...

Also lol it isn't that much of a change I realize looking at them side by side @-@ BUT STILL

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