08-16-2009, 05:31 PM
@ Kat Dakuu: Y'know, that's a snazzy way to look at that poem, I like how you interpreted it. When I originally wrote it, it was supposed to be about singing. Though, seeing it as a love song is rather interesting.
@ AcidReyne: Did you write the poem? Because, I think we're supposed to use poems written by ourselves.
Also, I suggest next time leaving the title out, as it gives away the topic and doesn't give the next person the fun of interpreting it.
Sorry if I sound rude.
So, seeing as the title is 'Life of a Teenager' I'm guessing it's probably a poem discussing ups and downs of being an adolescent and various things to avoid, who to be careful of, and such advice.
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The minute it entered their bodies,
A boy's fate was done and set,
With the shiny car keys,
Great force the boy has met,
Coming home from parties,
A boy's fate Death did get.
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