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Old 09-02-2009, 09:33 PM

i think it's about a prostitute. "...And waits to hear the honking horn." and the description on the clothes first intales a runaway goth girl,but then the line about waiting to hear a horn intales that she's a prostitute..............k,here's mine..


Scared to death,waiting for it to stop,
Just waiting for her attaker's rage to pop.
The slick sidewalk beneith her,blood all around.
She waits in pain to be found.
Her attaker has gone,leaving her alone.
To weak to get up and cold to the bone,
The rain pours down on her,as lights flash just before her eyes.
She cries and cries for help,but no one hears,and yet,still she cries...
All she did,was walk home alone,now she waits for death to give her a last kiss.
Now she thinks of what she will miss.
15 and very happy,now,she lies on the sidewalk bleeding.
Everything is black then,and now sweat is beading...
Beading everywhere...

In the hospital,she is revived,
As she opens her eyes,everyone has sighed.
Life has been given to her again,her attacker behind bars.
She realizes that life is all ours.







i just realized,that the meaning of this poem is really hard to figure out......:sweat:

Last edited by XxXEmoxVampireXlovexXx; 09-02-2009 at 09:59 PM..