@ biscuit.. I think its beautiful and the format is correct.. but I was counting the syllables... it doesn't seem like its in iambic pentameter. basically its 10 syllables each line with unstressed syllable followed by a stressed syllable. She gave an example in the first page post. ^^

You did a wonderful job.. I would love for it to be an entry, but I think she is going to count the syllables too since its a requirement. ^^

*huggles*