Quote:
Originally Posted by AshbornFox
hey! I'm back with the perfect idea!!!....hopefully...
Anyway, you should do one where this guy is in a band with his two twin brothers but they die in a car accident and hunts there brother every time he tries to play o.o yes, this is my idea for a poem lol
|
We were together for such a long time
But now I find I'm all alone
Thoughts of our years together haunt me
Everytime I pick up my sticks to play
My brothers dear
one just like the other
Why did you leave me
To tell our mother
Why couldn't you stay
and throw back another
Give me this night
to play one last time
your spirits around me
as I pay for my crimes
Letting you leave me
though I knew you unfit
to drive yourselves home
I should have stopped it
I feel you here now
your souls float around me
as I play one last time
before returning to thee
Give me a sign
Let me return
A band once again
Or let my soul burn
AshbornFox: There you go! Sorry it took so long!
----------
Quote:
Originally Posted by fiana7895
Here's a silly one:
Write a poem about a man who drove his car backwards up a tree while eating spaghetti!
;D
|
Every time I suck them up
I find meyself somewhere stuck
Like squirming worms
I slurp them inside
Gulping them down
as I go for a ride
But what is the fun
in the same old direction?
I'll take to it different this time
How about some reverse?
My focus returns to my sketty
and I fail to see
the oncoming traffic
and of coarse the tree
So here I sit
Sucking up this fine meal
once again stuck
'Cause how noodles make me feel.
I hope that works for you
fiana7895: !
----------
Quote:
Originally Posted by Saphire4260
I GOT A SLIGHTLY TWISTED ONE!
squirrels eating my eyes!
>:3 i like poetry myself but all mine turn out dark i couldnt do this cuz i cant write happy lolz i wish i could write like you
|
I look below
and see me there
No longer moving
I no longer care
Lifeless and cold
my body will rot
My body is ther
but I am not
Rats will nest in my stomach
and flies in my hair
Squirrels will eat my eyes
and I guess that is fair
Let them do what they like
with that abandoned flesh
For I go to a better place
a place where air is fresh
This is my final good-bye
but I know that no one will cry
For I died so long ago
the joy I have now
they must surly know
Up or down
it matters not to me
for now this time
I am finally free
Saphire4260: I made this one happy for you. At least it is to me. I hope you like it! Sorry for the late response!
----------
Quote:
Originally Posted by fade_to_grey
hello fellow poet! here's one for you: write a poem while listening to 'at anchor' by port blue
|
I move along
through my life
My soul's rythem
echoed in my steps
The people around me
Paying me no mind
As my soul takes wing
For the very first time
Like the flutter of a dove
A light chirp in it's beat
I find myself willing
To greet another day
The toils try and bring me down
But I must fly to this soulful sound
All those around me
They dream as I do
But we are mute to one another
We all live our own dreams
So as I move along
I listen to the song
From deep within
and it help me go
From moment to moment
Fufuling my soul
fade_to_grey: Just got my internet up and running smoothly, so sorry for the delay. I hope you like it! It's a nice song, and it really held me there. thanks for the challenge!
I hope to see more coming, now that I have the ability to respond once again!