i posted it...in fact it was originally suppose to be based off a story i wrote years ago for Halloween for my creative writing class, which actually had a funny end, but was pure horror in the middle, but instead i went for just plain horror. i mean i really wanted to drag this one out but once i got done writing it. it was almost 600 words so i had to edit. i hope it still sounds ok. with a 400 word limit a lot was taken out, bu ti understand with you reading them yourself i would be hard work to read tons of 1000 word stories, so its ok... thanks for letting me enter. i had fun just writing it!!!!