have you tried recoloring the hoodie yet?
recoloring in common colors helps me a lot when i need to see if i need to edit any shading :3c

mmm the dress is turning out cute! i do have a problem with the folds not aligning from the top and the bottom. XD but that's just me.
if you were to do that, I'd expect there to be more folding thus more shading in those areas though, like what you have near the left arm.

also with the crease in the chest area, it makes the fitting look tight, so maybe some more folds around the arm pit area. you could also just open up the arm hole so that tension eases up if you didn't want to put folds in the armpit area.