I posted this in pricing assistance too but I wanted to put it up for critiques as well. I've really only done realism this year and I'm kind of rusty when it comes to more manga-styled stuff.
do you guys think that the arms are too long? usually I make them too short. e.e

and I know that the scan is messy. I tried a new way of editing that doesn't work as well as my old way. =x (I use a camera rather than a scanner so it's never a flat gray to get rid of).