*sigh* all this writing is hard work. I'm still trying to figure out exactly how I want the end to go. My character is supposed to be apathetic most of the story (I don't know if that's coming off) with a few moments of frailty. But he finds a desire to live in the form of revenge at the end. And this story is really twisted. O.O I wonder what my classmates will think when they read it...