I am planning to bring the life into the characters once the story gets going a bit more. And sorry about my horrible grammer, this is my very first draft of my very first serious book. I hope that in some good practice, my writing will get better. And I am going to get my mother to check over my work once it is done. You see, I still live with my mother because I'm only twelve and still improving my writing. My main character truely trusts her new powers because she is like the goth, and she reads and studies those sorts of things, like witchcraft, mythical beings, and other sorts of powers. She is a bit frightened when she sees him, but she felt as if she knew him from somewhere, and she was truely curious about him, and decided to trust him, for the moment. And I'm sorry, you lost me. I don't know what you're talking about at the beginning. Hope that clears things a bit. :)