Hey!
Thank you for posting!
Ill never mind some crits!

So I coorect a few things.
It's true the top would fall if someone wear this IRL. It wouldn't be polite XD
Then I change lights, bottom and try other colors:




I must say I don't like them at all...Maybe the thrd and last are ok but not the other. They don't fit to the dress, I guess somebody could like it but I don't, they look sad!
I like your contrasted colors, it look like we had sparkles to the dress!
Maybe I'm a little obsessed with sparkles and bright colors haha!