Hm, the only thing I can really tell is that on the female tee the stripes shouldn't be straight on the boob area. Like they should curve to follow the contour of the chest.

There also needs to be more shading since it looks pretty flat. I know the light source is supposed to come from the top left I believe? So you need darker shading on the right side (my right, not the avi's right). Maybe take a look at some of the other tees we have on the site for reference?

Here are some terrible refs but hopefully they will give you an idea of what I'm trying to say about the stripes.



I'm not so great at commenting on pixels. Maybe Cora: or Nephila: can help give some better feedback than me? :?