My name is not Alice
But I feel like I'm in the wonderland
If poems would always rain in this place
I would always like to stay and catch it all.

Write it, Post it!
Let me read it, and yes i love it!
Let the emotions run in through your body
Share it and let it shine in our wondering hearts

You have the talent, Trust yourself
And believe in everything I'm going to say
Your poems saves me from Loneliness
Turning my solitude world in to wonderland!

I might post a few for you in time. But I'm bone dry right now. I promised my sister a story for christmad and I spent all of my creativity in one place. It's still not finished...

I've gone ahead and moved this into our Poetry subforum. :yes:

Thanks!

If you couldn't put anything in to words,
And keep doubting yourself,
You should stop and listen
Your heart was about to say something.

You have to believe what its saying
Cause it only knows the truth in yourself
No matter how much your mind interrupted,
Heart will speak louder until it gets uncontrollable.

Don't be afraid of loneliness
The longer you keep it, the more it will hurt
How long does it need you to notice?
I was always watching you outside that door.

If you will just let me in
We'll be carrying it together
Though it might take a lot of suffering
It doesn't matter as long as I'm with you.

I don't know how long is forever
To stay at your side
And even if this buried love can never be seen in your heart
Whole heartedly, I will set you free.

But I've got to love you forever
That's what my existence told me.

Hi Hibiscus ~

Since this is the poetry forum, stories don't really belong here. If you want to start your own thread for your short stories in the main Lit Spot forum, I'll be happy to move the stories/excerpts you posted here into a thread in the main forum if you'd like. Just let me know. :)

Ah, sorry, please move it for me, i don't know how to move it...just new here, im really sorry.

Hi Sizzla, i just deleted those wrong entries i'm sorry.

Oh, you didn't need to delete them! I was just going to move them to a new thread for you! :sweat: Let me see if I can get them back and then move them to a new thread. :yes: :D

Also, be sure not to sign your name to your posts in the future -- it's considered spam around here. :yes: Just FYI for ya'. :D I'll go ahead and delete it on that last post for you.


EDIT: Here's your story thread: http://www.menewsha.com/forum/art/li...d-stories.html

From now on, post your poetry here, and your short stories in that thread. :D

>Also, be sure not to sign your name to your posts in the future -- it's considered spam around here. Just FYI for ya'. I'll go ahead and delete it on that last post for you.

SOrry? I didn't understand it well...


ANd, sorry to ask this, but i don't want my stories to be posted anymore, that is one of the reasons why i deleted it other than it's a wrong post in poetry section. If you' have a time can you please delete those
ANyhow, thanks for all your help.