I've been working on getting my people to look right so what I plan for this thread is to put up a piece of my artwork when I'm done and have you guys tell me what you think about it. I'll say what I was focusing on during the drawing process.

For the first one I was focusing on the eye and the hair. I wanted wind and sadness to be seen and felt by the viewer. what do you think?

Waiting for My Love by ~Moon-Prince-Endymion on deviantART

There isn't enough contrast and i could work on the shadows on the face. The forehead is off enough though u tried to hide it with the hair...just saying...