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Old 04-10-2008, 07:35 PM

Lorieta
Now, we've all heard of the story Cinderella, right? Well, I bet you that you've never ever heard of Lorieta before. She's kind of like Cinderella but at the same time, completely different! How is that possible you say? Well, just stick around and you'll find out. Eventually.


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Old 04-10-2008, 08:08 PM


Once upon a time, there was a country girl named Lorieta. She was like most other girls. Even though she was very beautiful, she did not have some one that she truly loved. She had long golden curls that shined like the sun and blue eyes like the sparkled like the ocean. Her skin was oh so very fair. She was always happy and cheerful until...
One day, when she was grown up, her beloved father had grown tarribly ill and she was very sad. She knew that her father could not go to work to raise money and take care of himself. Lorieta then had an idea. She would go to the city and look for a job to raise money and help her father get better. That was her goal and she was determined.
The next morning, she set out for the city in looking for a job. Of course, she packed along with her some money just in case she gets hungry and need to buy something to eat. Sje figured that if she doesn't find a job and needs a place to stay, she could stay with her cousin, Stacey.
Stacey was Lotieta's most favorite cousin but Lorieta disliked Stacey's mom, Natasha. No one could disagree with that for they all knew how horrible Natasha is. Stacey's father had died some time ago and that's when Natasha showed her true nature. Even though Natasha was very cruel, she was always trying to please her daughter and protect her. Sometimes being a little too overprotective. Luckly, Natasha was away so Lorieta didn't have to deal with that. Lorieta was so pleased to the fact that she was once agian seeing her cousin and not having to deal with her aunt.
While she was going to the train station, she saw a big thunder cloud and could hear the thunderstorm getting nearer and nearer. Then, she felt a drop of rain fell on her head. It was starting to rain a little bit and she started running towards the train station. Luckly, she made it in time before it started to pour.

 


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