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Old 11-03-2009, 07:52 AM

XD But it pays off!



Bit of a character sketch I did of my own. It's still in the workings as I know there are several things still yet to be worked on it. Inking still needed.



Very very very rough sketch. Just fiddling with an idea that a friend wants me to do. ^_^

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Old 11-04-2009, 05:36 AM

Critiques plz? ^_^

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Old 11-04-2009, 06:55 AM

I do love what you did with the girl.

As for critiques: The girl's right arm (our left) seems a little too long. You may want to adjust it so that her elbow starts earlier / shorter forearm and her hand ends a little higher above the knee =3

Other than that, I'm not very good with body proportions xD

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Old 11-04-2009, 06:55 PM

Thanks!! Yah I see that with her arm, it's one of those things I'll need to fix in photoshop.

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Old 11-04-2009, 09:57 PM

her torso looks off. especially with her belly button in the middle. She appears to be tilted towards her left so I would move the bely button and see how that works. I would try using tracing paper and making a copy or two to see how the belly button looks in different areas.
And the arm as previously mentioned :D

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Old 11-04-2009, 11:22 PM

Hokay! That helps alot! Now to find where that tracing paper is stashed away... Lol

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Old 11-04-2009, 11:36 PM

lol I just had to buy a new pad... too many art classes and they all want the same supplies DX lol

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Old 11-04-2009, 11:40 PM

Oh believe me I know the feeling. And then I got into art classes where I had to go buy things I've never used again. That's aggravating.

I'm thinking about putting some fanart up here. Any ideas?

 


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