So yeah, typed this up when i was listening to the new say anything album. What do you think? Fail?

So long as I shall breathe
The demons will hurt those friends
Who want to see that which
Is tearing my soul to pieces
Though they try to see behind / 5
This mask that I viciously wield
The spikes digging into me will
Not be moved by the hands
Of mortal men. Some times it
Becomes too much to bear /10
Breaking me to pieces that scatter
to the shearing winds that carve
the mountains in to resolute faces
Yet why does mine look indecisive
So lost, confused, and very unsure /15
Lost in the mists of madness
Seeing hostile friends, knives in hand
But the knives are only in
My mind, betraying me once again
The demons may break me down /20
They may cripple, and waste me
Drive the ones I need away
and wrack my body with pain
But they can never stop me
From rising back up from them /25
From breaking these chains that bind
From raising myself up out of it
From taking the out stretched hand
From ripping the horned mask away
And saying enough is enough man! /30
I'm done with this, I am free.

I've gone ahead and moved this into our Poetry subforum. :yes:

In hindsight that makes a lot of sense.

I think it's pretty good sweetie. I liked the ending, simply because it relates to both you and I rather well. <3