This is actually the rough draft of the plot for a comic, I will be updating this first post with the page manuscripts for advice! This will be my first time, so please forgive me!

Plot: (Exposition) She goes to school, wondering what it's about, then the next day is Friday and she goes to school again forgetting about it and dreamless that night. When she gets home her parents surprise her with the little boy from her dream! And she remembers it right then!;;

(Rising Action) So she goes to the park with the boy because her parents told her too, and she sees this guy and he's shady but cute. The boy looks at him and then her, he tells her, "No, no. Not him!" She looks at him confused, "What?" "He's not the master." She's confused 100% now and he comes over and gives her his number, tells her to call this evening. "Okay" she says.;;

(Conflict) She calls and hears a gruff voice, "____, you're looking fine this evening" she freaks out and the little boy is behind her and just watches. "Hey, hey, ______ let's go downstairs" he tells her. She hangs up and follows him to the kitchen, there's blood and her parents are gone. "Too late, he saw you";;

(Falling action) Girl freaks out and runs out of the house dialing 911, "There's a man after me" she tells them. She tells them what he looks like and the road she's on. She's crying and trying to reach her friend's house which is on the end of the street. She's almost there then passes out.;;

(Denouement) She opened her eyes to see a room filled with heads and skulls. She smelled something awful. She tried to sit up but she couldn't, she was taped down. "W-what's going on?!" A knife hit her chest and she sat up in her bed, sweat dripping down her. Her mom stared at her and told her to get ready for school. "Ohgod.." she whispered, shivering.

Interesting Factor: The girl has a dream and a little boy tells her to not get up, or wake up. What if he sees her?

I actually had that dream, so I decided to make a story out of it since a lot of my dreams are great for story plots and such! Hehe C: Well lemme know how I can make it more interesting and such. And the weird format in the plot is due because I was using a story map of mine from English class! XD