Here is my new avie after taking into everyone's suggestions. Please give me a new rating?


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Tell me what you think and what you think I should change. Give me a rating between 1 and 10 and explain it please.

Since the dream avie creator only had female bases, the eyes and mouth are wrong.

Ermmm... It's a nice start, but there's a couple things you might consider changing?
1)The large glob of black on the bottom half.
2)Perhaps try to incorporate he red and/or blue in somewhere else upon the avvie, they're kinda clumped in certain spots.
Hope that helped you. <3
6.5/10, nice job.

7/10

You need more red and blue in it.

Maybe red shoes...or blue shoes.. a hairpin that is red..and keep the hair blue? not sure..>_<

I think you have too many colors going on. I'm not saying you can't put an avi together with 4 different colors, but it might be easier to go with 3. My advice is to remove the red items entirely. You definitely need more white on the lower half of your body and some more black on your head. You also need some more light blue in the center of your body. The birds alone aren't enough.

Once you got that down, then it will be easier to add some red in.

It's nice^^ 7/10

Have you tired other scarfs....
I feel like your avi needs more red or none at all

A little plain...
Trying adding more blue and red to the lower half, if you can't get both, I'd say go for blue.
There also should be a red head item, perhaps some sort of hair clip. :9
8/10

It's ok, though a little boring. Either add more light blue to the rest ofthe avatar or get rid of the winter birdies and change the hair color.

8/10
i like most of it
but it needs more work...

Thanks for all the critique.

i dont like it only ur hair

needs more blue maybe its needs more work on it 7/0 for rights nows

cool dream avi i give it an 8 good luck getting it!

6.5/10. Sorry. I don't think the colours match well. Try changing the hair colour to a dark red to match the belt. Either that or change the belt and win glass for add more red. and the blue is too centered in one area up top. Try spreading it around to make the avvie cohesive in colour.

7.5/10
You need a bit more red on top and bottom parts of your avi and more blue at the bottom.

5/10

The blue doesn't match at all, the winter birdies and the hair aren't even the same shade of blue.

The colors are clumped together, which doesn't work well for a balanced, overall aesthetically pleasing look.

To achieve a balanced look, try to have an item of each color on every part of the avatar. By that I mean have some black, blue, red, and white on the legs/feet, have all the colors on the torso/arms, and have all of the colors on the head/around the body. Try not to put items of the same color next to each other.

I'm going to mess around with the MAC and see if I can't come up with a more balanced avatars using the same colors and most of the same items.

I will do that when I get home, because I don't have the MAC at work.

5/10
I don't really like what you've done with the blue color...
at there is waaay to much black...

Thank you all for the advice. I am playing around with the avie on MAC also.

@ padfootsy - Ah, that would be really nice. Thanks. I like having different people's ideas, not just my own.

5/10.

The blue is just kind of random, along with the little bit of red. Maybe try taking out the red and adding a bit more of blue?

Hey (:
It looks ok, but I think it needs more blue at the bottom to match the hair and the stuff around it >.<

I have made a new dream avie.
Please give it a rating too.

Also. Make me a dream avie of your own. I like blue, black, and white items for CP.

Originally Posted by dragoness129

Thank you all for the advice. I am playing around with the avie on MAC also.

@ padfootsy - Ah, that would be really nice. Thanks. I like having different people's ideas, not just my own.

orry I took so long, but here is an idea...




It's very hard to match blue to that hair!!

Here's a slightly different one:

Hi chess piece! I love you idea for a dream avvie. Good luck in getting it!

@ padfootsy - It's alright.
Uh, they look...different that is for sure.

@ Fox Paw - Thank you. ^_^

I hope it doesn't take to long to get the avvie. It is so totally awsome looking and i am sure you'll gett compliments when you finally get it!