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waiinuyaoi
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07-28-2007, 09:33 PM
- Well . . I started drawing this picture but stopped . .something seems off . . Could someone please tell me what mistakes I made and what I should do to fix it before I continue drawing the hair ?
Also I would greatly love it if some one would highlight the things wrong in paint ; or try to fix it and circle the areas or something . . . Thankyou so much !!
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** edited picture
And yup this was done in paint blahh
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07-28-2007, 10:47 PM
Ahh, that looks nice. I actually see nothing wrong with it..except the side of the face on the...right side, looks a bit..wide? Or maybe the chin..it's kind of pointy.. ^^; Sorry I couldn't help much. ><;
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Caeluma
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07-28-2007, 10:55 PM
not much to critique but nice so far very cute
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waiinuyaoi
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07-28-2007, 11:01 PM
- Thanks for the advice suppi ^_^
. . I tried fixing it and got this . .
is this better or worse ? *sweatdrop*
And thanks for commenting on it aeluma ^-^ ~
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Zoop
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07-28-2007, 11:40 PM
Hey, It looks pretty good to me. Your style is cuuuute. x3
I did a little crappy red-lining--sorry if it interferes with your style. ^^" Ah, there really wasn't much to change. Hope it helps though~
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07-28-2007, 11:41 PM
Ah, it looks more...natural, you could say. ^^ Hm, it's probably that piece of hair that's making the drawing look kind of off. I mean the straight line part of it. Try making it more curvy? I may be wrong though. ^^;;
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waiinuyaoi
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07-28-2007, 11:43 PM
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Originally Posted by Zoop
Hey, It looks pretty good to me. Your style is cuuuute. x3
I did a little crappy red-lining--sorry if it interferes with your style. ^^" Ah, there really wasn't much to change. Hope it helps though~
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- Oh wow that helps so much ! o.o !!
Thanks so much !
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waiinuyaoi
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07-29-2007, 12:49 AM
- Okiee edit number 4 xO.
I tried to make the side curve in a bit and the chin longer like you suggested ;; .. . . And scooted the eye more to the side. .
Is it a little better know >w<;;?

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Zoop
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07-29-2007, 03:34 AM
Ooh, looks good to me.
Good luck with finishing it! ^^
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crystal_wings6
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07-29-2007, 03:52 AM
I don't see any probleme anymore, continue the good work!
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waiinuyaoi
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07-29-2007, 06:43 PM
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MiroshaxKerry
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07-29-2007, 08:04 PM
That was done in paint? O_O that is good, especially the eyes.. im trying to do them kind of eyes but i fail most of the time on paper as it is X_X
as for crit... not sure really except.. you know the eye lines? they should be down a lot more and add to them a little mroe as well ^^
also near the eye area try making a dent so it looks more eye like ^^
(edit): sorry i noticed thoses eye lines was eyebrows anyway make them eye brows longer and put eye lines just abouve the eyes ^^
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waiinuyaoi
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07-29-2007, 08:21 PM
- Oi thanks ill work on that i just edited the eyes this morning . .is this a little better?

**did eyes and blush in photoimpact. .
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LunaFeather
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07-29-2007, 08:36 PM
I would be thinking that she would be looking the way her face was turned, it just kinda throws me off. But still, it's good, especially since it's done in paint.
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Lady Taurus
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07-30-2007, 01:14 AM
I prefer the second style but both are good.
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