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Old 07-28-2007, 09:33 PM

  • Well . . I started drawing this picture but stopped . .something seems off . . Could someone please tell me what mistakes I made and what I should do to fix it before I continue drawing the hair ?
    Also I would greatly love it if some one would highlight the things wrong in paint ; or try to fix it and circle the areas or something . . . Thankyou so much !!

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    ** edited picture
    And yup this was done in paint blahh

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Old 07-28-2007, 10:47 PM

Ahh, that looks nice. I actually see nothing wrong with it..except the side of the face on the...right side, looks a bit..wide? Or maybe the chin..it's kind of pointy.. ^^; Sorry I couldn't help much. ><;

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Old 07-28-2007, 10:55 PM

not much to critique but nice so far very cute

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Old 07-28-2007, 11:01 PM

  • Thanks for the advice suppi ^_^
    . . I tried fixing it and got this . .
    is this better or worse ? *sweatdrop*


    And thanks for commenting on it aeluma ^-^ ~

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Old 07-28-2007, 11:40 PM

Hey, It looks pretty good to me. Your style is cuuuute. x3
I did a little crappy red-lining--sorry if it interferes with your style. ^^" Ah, there really wasn't much to change. Hope it helps though~
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Old 07-28-2007, 11:41 PM

Ah, it looks more...natural, you could say. ^^ Hm, it's probably that piece of hair that's making the drawing look kind of off. I mean the straight line part of it. Try making it more curvy? I may be wrong though. ^^;;

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Old 07-28-2007, 11:43 PM

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Originally Posted by Zoop
Hey, It looks pretty good to me. Your style is cuuuute. x3
I did a little crappy red-lining--sorry if it interferes with your style. ^^" Ah, there really wasn't much to change. Hope it helps though~
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  • Oh wow that helps so much ! o.o !!
    Thanks so much !

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Old 07-29-2007, 12:49 AM

  • Okiee edit number 4 xO.
    I tried to make the side curve in a bit and the chin longer like you suggested ;; .. . . And scooted the eye more to the side. .
    Is it a little better know >w<;;?

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Old 07-29-2007, 03:34 AM

Ooh, looks good to me.
Good luck with finishing it! ^^

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Old 07-29-2007, 03:52 AM

I don't see any probleme anymore, continue the good work!

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Old 07-29-2007, 06:43 PM


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Old 07-29-2007, 08:04 PM

That was done in paint? O_O that is good, especially the eyes.. im trying to do them kind of eyes but i fail most of the time on paper as it is X_X

as for crit... not sure really except.. you know the eye lines? they should be down a lot more and add to them a little mroe as well ^^

also near the eye area try making a dent so it looks more eye like ^^

(edit): sorry i noticed thoses eye lines was eyebrows anyway make them eye brows longer and put eye lines just abouve the eyes ^^

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Old 07-29-2007, 08:21 PM

  • Oi thanks ill work on that i just edited the eyes this morning . .is this a little better?

    **did eyes and blush in photoimpact. .

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Old 07-29-2007, 08:36 PM

I would be thinking that she would be looking the way her face was turned, it just kinda throws me off. But still, it's good, especially since it's done in paint.

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#15
Old 07-30-2007, 01:14 AM

I prefer the second style but both are good.

 


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