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#1
Old 09-03-2007, 06:25 PM

  • Ya~
    I decicded to do my old avvi as a headshot in paint~

    And I was wondering, how's it look~?
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    Anything I could do to make it better?

    Thanks for your time~

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Old 09-03-2007, 10:08 PM

Hey, for Paint without a tablet, thats pretty good.
My old drawings with just the bendy-line tool sucked Dx
Yours is pretty spiffeh though!

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Old 09-03-2007, 10:23 PM

  • Why thanks~
    Any tips, or improvement suggestions~?

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Old 09-03-2007, 10:46 PM

It's pretty cute~. Better than anything I can do on paint without a tablet since I'm left handed. xD I like the eye the most. As for suggestions, you should shade everything, such as the skin and hair, otherwise it looks too flat. n_n Concerning anatomy though, I can't really help you since I'm not too good at that either. >>; If you practice a lot though you'll definitely keep getting better ;D

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Old 09-03-2007, 11:10 PM

  • I dunno where to shade though~
    The way I'm drawing, they usually have all those spiked looking things in their hair, so it's easy to shade~
    This one doesn't.
    D;

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Old 09-04-2007, 01:26 AM

She could use some eye brows ^.^; It's not bad though.

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Old 09-04-2007, 02:19 AM

I don't really use paint much, so I'm unsure as how to critique this. ^^;;

Like people said before, it's very good with no tablet o_o!!

A few suggestions though: shading. Most importantly, the hair--otherwise, it all looks like one piece of "fabric" sitting on her head. xDD

As for how to shade...you could pick a darker shade of brown and just sketch some lines throughout her hair, following the way the hair falls. It's not really "shading", but it gives it some depth. On the other hand, you could pick a lighter brown and give it a few highlights. ^^

Help this helped...? ^^;

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Old 09-04-2007, 02:46 AM

  • Ugh~
    I can't seem to shade it right~

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Old 09-04-2007, 01:01 PM

  • it looks clean and neatly done, peanut ^_^

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Old 09-04-2007, 10:52 PM

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  • it looks clean and neatly done, peanut ^_^
  • Orly~?
    Anything I could improve~?

 


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