I think this follows the rules :?

Lines that I coloured. The lines however are part of a commission I made
http://neko-fayth.deviantart.com/art...ssion-57997654
Is where you can find the lines and the version coloured by the artist. They gave me full permission to use the lines as I like and I full credit them for the drawing.
My work is only the colours in the picture ( not the link). Mostly looking for thoughts on where else I needed shading and how to have made him look less flat.