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Old 09-26-2007, 01:43 AM

well...not that old (2months appromately)

but i posted it on the "other" avatar site i used to go to, and never wnet back to check for comments i dont think...or at least i dont remember...so here it is now
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Old 09-26-2007, 02:58 AM

Wow, I really like your style. The girl's features are very prominent, but they fit her face perfectly. I'd just say be careful with how you piece the hair. The one section looks like it's wrapped around her ear, as opposed to being placed in front of it. You'd be better off making a few more sections, or at least texturing it.

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Old 09-27-2007, 04:22 AM

alright, i get what your saying, thanks ^_^
ill try sectioning it off, or texturizing it whenever i get a chance to start drawing again XD
(dumb school and work :x )

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Old 09-27-2007, 12:38 PM

The facial features look great! One thing though is you should make it so the face doesn't seem so flat. Make the nose a little bit further out and extend the forehead a little more outward. She seems sort of squished in. But it's not bad at all.

Another thing is I'm not sure where you light source is coming from. I see maybe one coming directly at the front of her face? If so then you should try and fix the highlights in the back of the hair. Remove a few of them, perhaps. I'd say take the bottom two highlights out, or at least the one that's right behind the ear. Otherwise the shading is good.

Hope that helps =]

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Old 09-27-2007, 08:26 PM

oh very nice

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Old 09-30-2007, 11:38 PM

that is beautiful.
I do a lot of side profile drawings like that.
Especially if I'm just messing around and doodling at work or when I'm bored to death.
the rose looks pretty well drawn also.

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Old 10-08-2007, 02:01 PM

You've got an interesting style. ^-^
(This reminded me of the profile drawings I did a few weeks ago.)
I think most of the critiques have been given out to you.
Good Luck with future pieces.


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Old 10-08-2007, 07:12 PM

i like the hair on your person that you drew.
it's very detailed.

but i think i like the rose better.
Those are good!!!
:D

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Old 10-08-2007, 08:38 PM

I like how you've rendered the hair here! The features are well done also.
I'm very bad at side profile drawings. >_<; So, I really like this because of that fact.

 


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