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Old 09-29-2007, 06:13 PM

Random title.
Anyways... I'm posting here my recent art.
I'm looking for constructive criticism, so please. <33

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Made for a friend. <33
Used as an example for my shop.




A order from my shop on Roliana.
First time using the Prisma markers... kinda didn't use them much. x'D




Another order.
I like the antennas a lot. x'D
Yay stars.




Another order.
First time I draw a pose like this, would like c/c on it.



My latest
Sorry, I don't have it saved on this computer. * O*
First time actually using the markers.
I love them but I need lots of practice with them.
c/c please.


<3 ?

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Old 09-29-2007, 11:49 PM

Your art is really well drawn. And your style is awesome.

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Old 09-30-2007, 12:22 AM

yes smoking is bad1 intresting art it's kinda freeky with the eyes solid

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Old 09-30-2007, 04:08 PM

Thanks both ! <33

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Old 09-30-2007, 04:42 PM

really interesting style you've got there! You might want to work on your anatomy in general, though. They all look a bit on the flat side. You could use alot of work on hands, too.

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Old 09-30-2007, 05:27 PM

What would you reccomend me to do so they don't look flat ?
Also, thanks for the c/c :]

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Old 09-30-2007, 07:13 PM

Working on your anatomy will make them appear less flat, but also if you add darker tones and have a more prominent light source. Right now everything looks like it's being lit from the front. Try lighting them from the side.

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Old 10-01-2007, 04:16 AM

Oh, ok.
Do you think the black outlines could be making it looking flat too ?

Thanks :]

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Old 10-01-2007, 08:09 AM

I love the style, particularly the lips. They look so creepy... it's sexy!

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Old 10-01-2007, 12:27 PM

You have a nice unique style going on, like the way you draw the lips ♥ Very nice. And on your new type of pose, it's really nice! That drawing is my favorite out of your lot. You did a good job with proportions and the angling of the arms looks great! =]

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Old 10-01-2007, 06:40 PM

Thanks <33
Yay I'm glad you guys like the lips.

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Old 10-07-2007, 05:10 AM

Those are good, different but still really good!

 


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