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Autumn Twilight
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10-11-2007, 09:25 PM
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This is not a finished picture, but the only thing that is missing is the background.
I sketched a portrait of this character couple of months ago and just now I got to work on it further. I must say, creating an image of this character was really hard cause she is really a transgender, therefore should have feminine appearance, but with a slight hint of masculinity, like stronger jaw.
Tell me what you think!
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Joes Ka Boes
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10-11-2007, 10:56 PM
The drawing is pretty nice, though I think her face and neck are a bit long. Her eyes seem to be out of portion with her face. But I still find the drawing very pleasant to look at.
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Caeluma
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10-11-2007, 11:11 PM
Nice picture the face is alittle thin but I like it!
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blueangel84
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10-12-2007, 02:30 AM
cool i love the art.
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Autumn Twilight
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10-12-2007, 01:38 PM
Thank you for taking the time to look at my picture.
Yeah, I tend to make faces longer than they should be when doing portraits. I should be more careful to not do that, but it still kinda looks cute to me.
I usually don't draw eyes this way, I wanted to try out a different style. Maybe if I made them smaller they would fit the face better.
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aonith
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10-12-2007, 03:27 PM
Hm... well, rather nice and interesting style, though your coloring is a bit weird. I mean, you use many different techniques what is not so good. Though you have a good start. Keep it up.
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tanhuitian
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10-12-2007, 05:25 PM
Most of what I wanted to say is already said. The line width of the ears brings them to the front, making the picture look flat, as do the two-tones cell shading. I love the pendant that she's wearing on her neck - it's a nice detail. : D
Keep up the good effort!
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SoVindictive
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10-12-2007, 05:47 PM
It's nice, and I do certainly see the male aspect, the shoulders seem to be really quite wide. I think the thin face is quite pleasant to look at. Though I think I'd personally rather see the hair go straight over the eyes, rather than appearing to go through the lashes, it seems to just stop when the lashes start, it just doesn't appeal to me. It's less realistic in that aspect.
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NeonYellowBee
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10-12-2007, 08:26 PM
thats pretty good
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Katya
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10-12-2007, 09:02 PM
I think it's a good drawing, the lines and coloring are good but the anatomy's off a bit.
The eyes should be tilted up less on the edges I think and the mouth's a little small if you're going for a masculine look.
Maybe the shoulders should be narrower too even just so that they fit in the picture, they'll still be broad but right now it's a little too much in my opinion. =/
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Nuinui
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10-12-2007, 09:40 PM
I think the neck is to high and i think the shoulders are a bit big..the eyes are a bit high in my opinion lol but its still good ^_^ :P
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Cherry Chaos Cat
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10-13-2007, 04:22 AM
I like the colouring it's really well done I also love how your signature is in the earing very cute and creative, work on her face and shoulders though her face is way to long and her shoulders are a bit wide, oh yea and I like the necklace!
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Ultra Cute
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10-13-2007, 04:26 AM
The coloring is really good. And so is the shading. Good job ^_^
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Ryiana
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10-13-2007, 06:49 AM
the long-ness of the face....it scares me....
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