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Old 06-29-2009, 08:50 PM

Hey, anyone want to help me by criticizing my arts?

Or at least

I wanted to know if these styles would interest you >>;;




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Old 06-29-2009, 09:01 PM

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i love them both!
the first is really cute
and the second is superb
i love all the swirls

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Old 06-29-2009, 09:04 PM

The first one is cute, not much to critique there.
I think you went a little swirl-crazy on the second one, it's a bit too much in my opinion. The shading is also lacking. I do like the style it was drawn in though, and the cloud is pretty impressive. :)

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Old 06-29-2009, 09:10 PM

XDD

@Esteji: Thank you~

XDDD

I really wouldn't say 'cute' to describe the first one Ou<

@Hamlet:

XDD...I was just trying out really odd styles. :P

The swirls and simplicity were part of teh....style? lol

But yeah, these styles don't really give much room for criticism do they? o_x

Wanna tell me where my shading is lacking? o3o

Btw.....did u draw ur siggy, cuz its amazing? o3o

Your freebies (lol....i stalk'd ur threads just nao. :3) are also amazing...wonderful style. :3

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Old 06-30-2009, 05:03 AM

I want. ; 3;

I love the swirls!
>w<

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Old 06-30-2009, 05:16 AM

Squishy: Hmm I think it's mostly because it all appears to be one shade of grey. Since she is in a moonlit sky you could've added a lot more blue tone to it to make it more interesting. :)

Gasp! Stalker! Haha, thank you though. Yeah I drew my siggy art, it needs updating but I am lazy ;_;

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Old 06-30-2009, 09:51 PM

@Itsuna: LOL, ty. :D

@Hamlet: Actually, I kinda threw the background there as an afterthought...and then shaded as a afterthought too. :O....and then got too lazy to do more than that one shade....ehehee

and I used the multiply tool instead of picking out individual shades. *lazy*

But yeah, I'm thinking of putting this on a shirt, but I can't decide whether to get rid of the bg or not. >O<

XDD....I love ur lineart and ur shading and ur style~~ *dies of jealousy*

XDDD

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Old 06-30-2009, 10:27 PM

If you completed the tail of the cloud and deleted the moon, I think it would make a fine shirt design! :D

And thank you for the compliments~

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Old 07-01-2009, 04:01 AM

XDD...That was what I was sort of thinking too......

Only problem is, I'm using my own paper transfer thinger...and I don't know if its clear or not >O<

and then I don't know what color shirt to put it on either. :O

Oh, and ur welcome....:33

lol...do u have a deviantart? o3o

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Old 07-03-2009, 03:09 AM

I personally think those look great!
It's interesting to see those three different styles; love them all!
The 'chibi' like is very cute, I actually like how uhm.. thin she looks; usually you encounter very round and uhm, oval-looking characters.
The shading is very simple and neat, it's nice :)

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Old 07-11-2009, 10:46 PM

@Mes: XDDD

I can draw those round chibis too. :P

LOL

now its anorexic chibis ftw. :P

lol...iono

Thanks for the comments. <3

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Old 07-13-2009, 06:06 PM

Sorry Squishy, I didn't see that you had replied! :(

I think a powder blue or even a white shirt would match the graphic well.
And yeah I do have a dA but it's full of lame old stuff I'm not too proud of, haha...

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Old 07-13-2009, 11:27 PM

incredible art you got!keep it up!:3
sorry im not really good at critique
i can only give you compliments and
cheer you on!-gets out pom pom-
Go!Go!Squishy!you can do it!

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Old 07-16-2009, 11:19 PM

@Hamlet: XO

The thinger that I printed on made all the white transparent....and I ended up printing it on a blue shirt, and it turned out terrible. :O

I did the weird chibi on top on a white shirt, and it turned out great, cept I forgot to print it mirror image. -_-;;

Aww...XO

@Desire: Thank you~ :D

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Old 07-16-2009, 11:22 PM

Oh, that's too bad. A white shirt is the best option then :D

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Old 07-17-2009, 02:29 AM

@Royal:No problem!im glad i got to see your artwork ;3

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Old 07-17-2009, 08:34 PM

I love that people in your style are kind of boneless, heehee. It's very cute! and original.

 


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