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Old 07-30-2009, 10:14 PM

Please give me your honest opinion.
i made several grammar mistakes. i apologize.
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I slowly turned to glare at Hutton as I felt a hand slide up my leg, again. Ok, i
know i shouldn't be this mad about the hottest guy in the world thinking we have
a connection, but he's not my type. My type isn't shallow, Hutton makes a kiddy
pool look deep.
"Hutton" I sung "if you want too keep that hand you better move it."
"Liz, you wouldn't dare" he mocked, his plain brown eyes playful. He slowly moved
his hand higher. When he reached my hip the old lady on the park bench across
from us left shaking her head. I knew he was right and he knew it to. I couldn't
hurt the big brown hair, brown eyed moron. Hutton slide his hand under my white
hoodie then he moved it under my purple cami. I slid my hand over his and moved
it. His touch made my skin crawl. I held his hand as i jumped of the bench. While
we walked the fall wind played with my pitch black hair. My blue eyes were
dancing as a giggle excapes my lips. The wind makes me feel safe when it plays
with my hair. Hutton looked at me amused, a smile breaking across his face.
"Shut up" i laughed "Come on, lets go get a pretzel." I tugged on my extreamly
shallow boyfriends hand as we went in search of a pretzel.

Last edited by Red Panda; 08-02-2009 at 09:19 PM..

 


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