
08-06-2009, 06:04 PM
It's pretty cute, and would look good as a rough draft. It's a good beginning, but needs refining. An easier approach would have been to sketch it out, ink it into lineart, then color (Or turn it blue).
It looks excessivly feminine, to the point where it does look like a female, instead of a male. The cowbell looks more like the top of a sailor uniform.
You have talent, but you need to pratice more. Pratice makes perfect!
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