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Old 08-12-2009, 12:01 PM

Hiya!
I made a sketch for a friend,
can you tell me what you think about the proportions?
Constrictuve criticism is very appreciated


=3



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Old 08-12-2009, 12:47 PM

It took me a minute to find something you could make better, it's so awesome! only issue I see is the hand on the hip doesn't really look like it's rested on it. It's kind of odd... otherwise, amazing work!

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Old 08-12-2009, 12:49 PM

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It took me a minute to find something you could make better, it's so awesome! only issue I see is the hand on the hip doesn't really look like it's rested on it. It's kind of odd... otherwise, amazing work!

thank you very much =D
And yes the hand was bothering me quite a while >.<
I tryed to layer the jacket over it, but it still doesn't look right Dx
I will try to turn it somehow. Does anyone have good reference images for a hand? =O

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Old 08-12-2009, 12:51 PM

I actually have an idea- Maybe you could lightly shade the back of the hand (towards the wrist) so it looks like it's a bit further back and maybe wrinkle the jacket a bit where the hand is... just an idea.

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Old 08-12-2009, 12:56 PM

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I actually have an idea- Maybe you could lightly shade the back of the hand (towards the wrist) so it looks like it's a bit further back and maybe wrinkle the jacket a bit where the hand is... just an idea.
thank you, this is actually a really good idea =D
I will do so and post the changes here, later on 8D

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Old 08-12-2009, 01:02 PM

Your welcome :D

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Old 08-14-2009, 03:37 AM

i like it! a lot! i feel humbled. :o

Whoa! I just realized that's 4 someone on Gaia! yay i'm part of Gaia as well! (same username there, too)

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Old 08-14-2009, 04:45 AM

OH my....That is a very good drawing. O.O Good Job!

Lolz I am from Gaia too. Same user. x3 Rofl

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Old 08-14-2009, 05:38 AM

it is realy nice :)

is it gaia art ?

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Old 08-15-2009, 07:23 PM

thank you everyone
yes this is gaia art for a good friend there =3
And I am also on Gaia, same name xP

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Old 08-15-2009, 10:17 PM

I really like it. It's a realistic style, but it's pretty cool. I think the proportions are good, you did a really good job ^^

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Old 08-16-2009, 01:42 AM

Like Misha_Heart said the hand on the hips is a little awkward, but the mouth to me also looks a bit odd like his puckering up XD

you did a great job with it overall ^_^

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Old 08-16-2009, 10:53 PM

is that smok the baby dragon?? the guy looks fiiine~

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Old 08-16-2009, 11:02 PM

I rather like it. It's pretty detailed and awesomely drawn. *two thumbs up*

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Old 08-19-2009, 01:40 PM

thank you everyone x3

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#16
Old 08-27-2009, 12:08 AM

Nice sketh intersing style and he has a nice pose xd

 


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