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Old 09-01-2009, 10:06 AM

Hello there ^^ Just wanted to see how much I can charge for art like this:



Please note: I used to be on Gaiaonline and this is just a picture I had done with my avatar on gaia =3

Edit: Oops! Sorry, didn't realize I couldn't ask for pricing suggestions in this thread. Just critique it, please ;)

Last edited by Erotique; 09-01-2009 at 10:16 AM..

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Old 09-02-2009, 02:31 AM

its gorgous!im no good at critique so im sorry if i helped in
no way

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Old 09-02-2009, 03:08 AM

The nose get too narrow as it reaches the tip. There's gotta be room for nostrils, even if you don't draw them in. The top of the head is a bid flat, it could use to be rounded and the fold of the eyelid under the eyebrow would fit what you're trying to here.

The Head circlet thing needs to curve with the head more, it flat-lines too earlier on the forehead and the earrings should be attached to ears. Right now it looks like they're attatched to her hair...

I like the hair near the shoulders though and the eyes are gorgeous

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Old 09-02-2009, 10:18 AM

The face anatomy's a bit awkward but I like it!It' s your style.
I love the way you coloured her lips but you might  want to try making your lines smoother? Like at t he eyebrow area.

Last edited by Jazzu; 09-05-2009 at 01:45 AM..

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Old 09-02-2009, 05:53 PM

hihi as far as pricing goes I just wanted to bring this to your attention
http://www.menewsha.com/forum/art/ar...cing-here.html

I made the same mistake too. . . new here ><;

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Old 09-02-2009, 07:20 PM

It could be better, but the eyes, the background and the hair are pretty good made...
But why in the world do you pixelate the jewelry when you can draw it? It doesn't fit in the picture...
But well... You're pretty good at your style

 


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