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Old 11-24-2009, 01:04 PM

That drawing is beautiful!

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Old 11-26-2009, 05:34 PM

I love it , its great, alittle more practice and it willbe amazing!

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Old 11-27-2009, 09:31 PM

Wow! I love it!:O The hair is awesome and the picture has a lot of character. You have a very cool style. The necklace is a good touch too. The background is awesome. I love the stars. Keep up the good work. I'll be checking back soon to see if you posted any new work.:)

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#29
Old 11-27-2009, 11:00 PM

its better than my stuff. no fair. alwhile.

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#30
Old 11-27-2009, 11:52 PM

It looks like you got the proportions correct, though the eye is a little off place. Perhaps moving it to the right more?
And the shading needs to be a little more noticeable. The background needs to be changed as well. The photoshop brushes are unprofessional and almost ruins the outlook of a drawing. Its better than a white background, but not by very much.
Other than that, its great! The concept is really cool.

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#31
Old 11-30-2009, 12:06 AM

Wow, that's really cool! I like the necklace and the way that the background and colors bring out her eyes. I suggest that you add a bit more contrast to the shading, but otherwise, good job! <3

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#32
Old 12-01-2009, 08:01 AM

my first opinion of the eye started the same as everyone Else's but for some reason I kinda like it the way it is. It looks like a very unique style and I think it works with the character. I agree that the one solid line on her shirt leaves questions about her breasts but that's the only thing I can see and I only saw it because of a previous comment. Love it!!!

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#33
Old 12-01-2009, 09:02 AM

Oh, i like this~ especially the colors used ~ even if I'm not into emo anymore x3 [[i was before]] great job~<3

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Old 12-07-2009, 09:57 PM

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:yumeh1: ok so here is something that i just finished and i REALLY REALLY want to know what you people think.. I NEED ALL THE HELP I CAN GET!!!!
ps. sorry its so small on here its actually alot bigger lol



thanx so much everyone that checks this out :glomp:
First of all, I really really like this picture very much. Good job.

I have to say that the bangs are so life-like. *pets* Which is pretty impressive considering you have this anime-like (but not completely) style. Though, I'd like to see highlights and some darker strands of hair placed through the back part of the hair just to have the same quality through out.

I also really like the clothes, they are realistic and seem to fit the character you drew. Plus, the accessories you added, the piercing and necklace, finish the drawing beautifully.

I love the makeup (I really wish I was as skillful in doing my own let alone being able to draw it!!) However, there are a few of problems in some of the features of the face. One being that the right eye is too close to the edge of the face, it would need to be brought in closer, unless you were to draw in the left eye. The key to drawing eyes is that you draw three eyes of the same size right next to each other with no place in between and then erase the middle eye. It would look like this {0}{0}{0} The top of the forehead that connects to the middle eye's irises are where you begin to draw the nose. The missing left eye is another issue with the draw, without it, the drawing looks like it's missing something. If you don't want to draw the actual left eye, I would suggest lightly adding in just the basic outlines and add more hair. Darken it up a bit where you can see the eye through the hair.

I'd also like to see a bit more shading around the facial features like the nose, lips, chin, cheeks, forehead, and eyes just to give the face more of a three-demensional feel like where you did the neck.

Hope this helps.

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#35
Old 01-02-2010, 04:24 AM

The style reminds me of Tekkinkreet. :3 I love the facial expression, but the lines on the body look like they could be a little more steady by the shoulder on the right... Very cute.

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#36
Old 01-03-2010, 03:34 PM

the shoulders are off and everything is flat. try darkening the shadows to emphasize more depth.

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#37
Old 01-10-2010, 01:43 AM

i like it way better then what i could do for sure lol

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#38
Old 01-11-2010, 02:29 AM

love it!

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#39
Old 01-13-2010, 08:32 AM

It is very cute, but there's a lot you could improve on. Try adding more texture to the hair than just in that one area. Also, you could try using a few different photoshop brushes than just the star one to make an interesting background (not to say the one you made isn't interesting, just something to experiment with). The eye is a bit too far off to the side, and with the way the bangs are parted, you'd be able to see a bit of the other eye, too. The wardrobe, nose and mouth are awesome. I love them so much. The right shoulder is really awkward and looks like it's been removed from its socket. I'd try moving it down a little so it's more in line with the other shoulder. I did a quick red-line for you. Great job, overall, good shading! Keep practicing, you're going to be amazing!

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#40
Old 01-14-2010, 05:17 AM

The only thing that I see wrong with it is that it only has one eye. I know it is suppose to be covered with hair but you should be able to see it through the small gap in the bangs, but there is nothing there. Do you see what I mean?

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Ooo! Briannamal, love the pic... I posted before I saw you had posted and with a cool pic explanation. :P

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