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Old 11-07-2009, 10:31 PM

So, I will warn you that my art does contain some nudity. So youngins... beware. Although it really isn't that bad.

http://zoom-zoom-divorce.deviantart.com/

I haven't really drawn anything lately, but this is all my art.
I really want an outsiders opinion, is my art good? Am I a good artist? Good enough to be considered... good?

It's hard to say when comparing me to other people. But I'd really like outsiders opinions, in looking at my art, do you think it is good, or bad?

Here is a few examples:


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Old 11-12-2009, 04:40 AM

Your art is great! I enjoy all of it, even the nudes. Keep up the good work!

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Old 11-12-2009, 05:25 AM

These are both really good! Your line art is very clean and smooth :)

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Old 11-12-2009, 07:42 AM

Wonderfully well done. I love the movement in the second one!

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Old 11-12-2009, 11:00 PM

well to be quite honest... the first one made me a bit uncomfortable. Maybe I'm a little behind the times but I just can't seem to appreciate sexually suggestive cartoons :(

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Old 11-13-2009, 05:41 AM

You're definitely not a bad artist, but still not quite there to be considered yet. Your line art is clean and crisp, but there's a point where the consistency of the lines begins to fall back on you. Take this piece for example: [x]
The line flow varies depending on the sort of edges it depicts, or what may be overlapping.

On the second image, the line work is very different from the first. Keep away from working with line art that's made with the swishy thin-to-thick-to-thin strokes as you did. Just try to work alone with the flow of what I stated above with the example. Sometimes you want to make the line art subtle in some areas by not even closing a line at all, and sometimes you really want to broaden it, like in an area that may create a triagle, where the triangle recedes into a black shadow.

Your anatomy isn't bad. For the most part it seems you've got it down pretty well. The eye of the second piece - shorten the line. Take some edge away from both sides to give room between the end of the eye to the nose bridge and likewise to the opposite side.
I would however work out the edges of your muscle work with a more established feel, like in the knuckles/fingers. For that first piece, the rib cage should come off sharper instead of subtly curved.

Fabric folds - had I only seen your fullmetal alchemist piece, I'd say you've got it down to the core with fabrics, but from your linework, I'll have to say that this is somewhere you have to work on more. This is actually where you can practice the whole line consistency change and the like. Right now, with the way you currently work out your line art, the fabric folds are very stiff and feel unnatural. Start subtly, and then go thicker as you reach mid-line, and then end with a lighter, but more than subtly line, or another subtly line.

o 3o I like your hair.
FMA piece is my favorite. I would work more with that style.

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Old 01-20-2010, 04:24 AM

Lovely work! love the coloring and such- I'll be watching you on DA

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Old 01-20-2010, 04:26 AM

I LOVE your Miku picture!

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Old 01-20-2010, 05:13 AM

omg your like over the hill good! seriously!!! it looks like something out of a coloring book XD a anime coloring book anyway... haha thats awesome i could never do anatomy,poses or clothes that good... or anything at the matter..awesome!

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Old 01-20-2010, 06:12 AM

I completely forgot that I had posted this such a long time ago. Well, maybe it wasn't so long ago. I appreciate all of your comments and advice, I know there is a lot I need to work on.

I am currently working on two different drawings, well both of them are of Miku Hatsune, and I hope I can get them done soon. I got mad a one of them because the hair wasn't working xD

I'm gonna work really hard on the linearts though, my problems is that I like to speed draw when I get to the end. Same thing with coloring.
I hope that I have enough patience to make these upcoming pictures worth while :3

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Old 01-22-2010, 02:22 PM

From an outsiders perspective; Your art is amazing~

I wish I could draw like that. Honestly, I do. o.O

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Old 01-22-2010, 07:07 PM

Soybean, if you could tell me what exactly is sexually suggestive about the first image on this thread? Or were you referring to something in the thread makers DA gallery? Because the catgirl seems to be fully clothed and her positioning seems fairly innocent.

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Old 01-23-2010, 03:48 AM

I was confused about that too xD
But I decided to just leave it be.

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Old 01-23-2010, 04:44 AM

wow they're both very gorgous.i wish i could draw like that keep up the good work ;)

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Old 01-23-2010, 10:38 AM

Nice, love the hair O:

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Old 01-23-2010, 06:12 PM

they are amazing! i wish i could draw like that DDX

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Old 01-26-2010, 11:36 PM

well done!! i like to draw furries myself, they are not as easy as they look ! i really like the 1st pic

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Old 01-27-2010, 06:51 PM

Wow. You're a wonderful artist!
I love your pictures and your DA name. Just watched you as well.

~Dark

 


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