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Old 12-21-2009, 09:36 AM



Yes, I realize she is sitting on nothing. It is a gift for a friend. Her RP character or some shiz.

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Old 12-21-2009, 06:26 PM

Her face is very manly. I thought it was a man at first.

Looks good though.

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Old 12-21-2009, 09:08 PM

Ha, um thanks?

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Old 12-24-2009, 04:59 AM

I like it. Although, I like everyone that reads, lol.

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Old 12-24-2009, 06:17 AM

Aww, the face isn't manly. Just not fairy-like with an upturned nose and such. I think it makes her more real. The lineart is very smooth. I like the feet.

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Old 12-25-2009, 11:01 PM

I can tell that you have lost of talent as an artist. I would love to see more pictures from you. Looking at the picture I cant find anything wrong with it. You have all the portions right and it looks natural. Great job.

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Old 12-27-2009, 04:59 AM

Very nice, lots of detail, perfectly proportioned, smooth line art. This deserves an A++! You are a wonderful artist and I agree, I would like to see more art like this from you in the near future.

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Old 12-31-2009, 03:33 PM

I would think her more manly is because of the breast... *looks at chest past a lot*

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Old 01-01-2010, 12:37 AM

Amazing line art! I love the solemn expression you used, and the way you rendered the hands. :heart:

I believe the legs are a bit too short though, unless that is part of her design?

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Old 01-02-2010, 01:12 AM

You're pretty good with anatomy based on this picture. It all looks pretty well proportioned to me. The face is pretty realistic, I like it. Very nice work. Are you leaving it as is or coloring it in/adding background?

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Old 01-03-2010, 02:21 PM

No coloring or background. I suck hardcore at coloring line art. Or at least, I am too lazy. I am sure there are all sorts of anatomy issues, I didn't really notice if the legs or too short or not, I didn't exactly use a reference. I looked at my foot in a mirror. Ha.

She is supposed to be somewhat plain in terms of appearance. Not long lashes and full lips and all that. And her chest is covered? /shrug/

Thanks for feedback.

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Old 01-05-2010, 06:48 AM

Her features are really similar to that of a man's and her legs are too short.

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Old 01-06-2010, 02:05 AM

Wing, that has to be the most useless bit of constructive criticism I have ever had. Cudos.

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Old 02-21-2010, 05:55 AM

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