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Old 11-24-2009, 02:30 PM

These are sort of old but lately i've been wanting some CC, but i'm not sure what exactly to do with some of my dolls, I don't know how to improve them at the moment and its irritating me. XD Here are just a couple dolls that i've made that are pretty close to how I doll now-a-days.



Base credit: http://disappeared.de/



Base credit: http://www.lolaart.net/pixel/



Base credit: http://extreamly-dreamy.blogspot.com/



Base credit: http://www.firstlove.jexiste.fr/



Base credit: http://www.mya-ow.net/index2.html



Base credit: http://patatosa2005.altervista.org/home.html

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Old 12-03-2009, 09:17 PM

I really like them. The one before the last doll is my favorite.

And I'm horrible at giving CC. So I never do it. Plus I never do it because I don't know if I'd hurt the feelings of the person I'm giving the CC to.

But, I will say this. The red shorts on the first one, they bother me. The lineart is great and I like the green detail at the bottom. The dark red shading is what bothers me. It seems like too much to me. As for fixing it, I don't know what to tell you. I'm not that great with pixel shading and I've never done shorts. That's all I can think of.

But if you're looking for improvement, I'll just say how I've learned and how others say you can improve. Just look at other people's dolls. Look at tutorials. Look at real-life photos. It all helps. Also, if you join dolling forums where the people are nice and accept all types of dolling work and not the "dolling is only done this way," you can get good input and help.

Hopefully I helped some.

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Old 12-13-2009, 02:59 PM

My top favourite from all your dolls is the first one. Even though the shorts do look funny. They stick out way too much, making it seem like the shorts are wayy too thick and stiff. The top is a bit too skin tigh, unless that's what you want.

This is all my opinionated advice, don't take it too heart. My least favourite is probably the 2nd and 3rd one, jsut cause some parts bother me. The second one really bothers me since the nails look odd. It looks like its thin and fragile, rather than hard and strong. And it looks to 2D, you need more shading as well for the metal claws. The third one's hair looks like one color, only. And the eyes aren't that shaded. It's my preference, but I like it when pixellers add more variety of mixed color to show depth and shading.
In my eyes, I just see that you need to shape the clothing more naturally, rather than flat 2D. So more shading and realistic clothing line art.

I really like them! So cutee~~ <33

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Old 02-24-2010, 09:09 PM

Thanks for the CC, and I agree the shorts look pretty bad, and i'm trying to make my pixel art less 2d like, i'm working on getting things to look more realistic but still cartoonish if you know what I mean. Thanks again for the CC you two. :)

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Old 02-24-2010, 10:20 PM

very nice job.your dolls look so lovely.i need to make some new dolls myself though school keeps burrying me

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Old 02-25-2010, 06:26 AM

the lolartnet one is very fun. You can make some cute ones out of that.

I like your sig, by the way.

 


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