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Old 11-11-2009, 11:48 PM

I've been doing a lot of stuff lately and I want a little bit of feed back on it so feel free to comment or critique. I'd appreciate any advise that you can give :)

So to start off here are the two most recent things I've been messing around with.

This is a sketch I did a few days ago of the spring Goddess Flora. I know the proportion is all out of wack but I'm probably gonna work on it some more



and this one is a character named Lenni from a comic book/manga that I've been in the process of creating. It's done with prismacolor and copic markers


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Old 11-12-2009, 01:34 AM

the first one is very elegent, but id have to say my favorite is the second one. its so firey, i just love it! haha, you very talented. have you considered selling? or maybe puting up your stuff on sites like deviant art or sheezyart. you would be welcomed very nicely into those kinds of communities, with your talent. keep it up! good luck!!!!!

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Old 11-12-2009, 02:13 AM

I really love both of them but the color in the second one really makes the picture pop!

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Old 11-12-2009, 04:24 AM

Thanks both of you! :)
@melodyskokoro I have a deviantart it's sylvergantt, I'm not too popular on it though lol

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Old 11-12-2009, 07:45 AM

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Thanks both of you! :)
@melodyskokoro I have a deviantart it's sylvergantt, I'm not too popular on it though lol
I hope you dont mind if I check out your DA account. I have one as well its yamata.deviantart.com

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Old 02-25-2010, 04:30 AM

yeah, flora's head is too big. Lenni is super cute and awesome. She does look like she may fall forward though. i'm not sure if it's the way she's standing or if her legs are a little too thin. Could be both.

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Old 02-25-2010, 06:30 AM

I'm a sucker for b/w. It's very amazing work you have.

The second one reminds me of a webcomic sorta thing. Have you ever thought of starting one?

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Old 02-26-2010, 07:25 PM

wow!i love your art.the last one looks awesome ;3 keep up the good work

 


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