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Old 03-22-2010, 03:28 PM

See if I improve or weaken...
It had been one year since my last artwork... I think. due to horribly busy working schedule which I get rid of it now. I finished this piece 2 weeks ago... I think... and since there is not many people seen this before, I would like to show it~



Seriously needs more comments.

You do not need to answer all these... though appreciated~ <3X

Do you think she is...
out of proportion?
the fold of clothes unnatural?
slanting unnaturally?
Flowing lines messy / unnatural?
expression is rather hard/neutral?
her head is BIG?
the hands and fingers in correct turnings/positions?


(Character copyrighted by Yuri-san/ Emma Corrin)

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Old 03-22-2010, 06:46 PM

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Do you think she is...
out of proportion?
No, she's not too terribly out of proportion. The only thing that strikes me as a little out of whack are her shoulders, which seem too broad to me. The hand by her mouth is also a little bit small.

I think what pops out more is the lack of definition in her anatomy. I can't see any of the musculature in her arms or even the gentle curve in the shoulders.

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the fold of clothes unnatural?
They are a little bit unnatural. It sticks out the most, if you're really looking for it, in the back of the skirt. Most cloth tends to flow, so there is a lot of curve. The lines are straight in the back and it makes it look stiff.

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slanting unnaturally?
Not really. The slant you've taken simply implies motion.

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Flowing lines messy / unnatural?
Nope, they are not messy at all. I think what you might want to work on is some line variation to give them just a little more punch of interest. =3

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expression is rather hard/neutral?
I wouldn't call it hard and it's not neutral. I would say it's a little generic in terms of the style it's in? It's a very familiar expression, it'd be great to see you add in some little personal quirk of the artist to turn it more your own. x3

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her head is BIG?
xD No. I don't find it too big at all.

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the hands and fingers in correct turnings/positions?
Fingers and hands in general are tricky. Their turning and positions look fine, I think they would just benefit from a little more of the anatomical structure that I mentioned in your first question. That just takes some practice drawing your own hands. =3

 


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