
06-16-2010, 05:24 PM
I've dug around, and from the best I can find this is the forum I should be in!
I came up with a new idea to write about last night. Would you guys mind telling me what you think about it?
A boy falls asleep and awakens on the shore of a creek he usually explores during the day time. He walks up the bank to explore and discovers it is not the same creek, this ones banks are much to high and all the trees are different. A woman calls out to him declaring herself to be his mother. He goes with her after she pulls him from the creek he had been trying to swim in. She leads him to a small castle where it is explained that he was sent to a different world to protect him from his terrible brother. He was only brought back now because the two kingdoms were finally going to war and they needed his help. During the fight the boy meets with his brother who attempts to kill him.The boy escapes but appears to be captured by the guards. The world is made to think this as the boys kingdom falls. In actuality the boy escapes to a nearby house. The couple there tells him he can stay as long as he wants, and that his brother does not know of his escape. In fact, his ‘execution' is supposed to be televised tomorrow night via the Global News Network. His brother had explained in the announcement that he explained to kill the world's hope three times over. That night guards burst in trying to find the boy, who narrowly escapes through a dark field which leads to the creek. From there he finds a boat and attempts to escape to the ocean, and from there to another continent.
The Boy: Eleven or twelve. Because he thinks it's a dream he has more bravery in this world than the one he's from. He becomes afraid again when he realizes it’s not a dream.
Brother: Fierce as a tiger with the skills to match. His hair is as red as roses in full bloom. He is not a very good leader, and is a bit of a brat. He's around thirteen or fourteen.
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