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Old 06-11-2010, 10:41 AM

I will post stories here and let you guys comment on them and tell me what needs improving so I can make things better!

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Old 06-12-2010, 12:18 AM

Prolouge: After the war

The war was horrible...I should know, I fought in it. We won but...I was left behind on the last battle feild, I was knocked out in the middle of the battle, I woke up seeing the ruin, the destruction. This place was as dead as the enemey soldiers, it was littered with bodies and wepons as far as I knew I was the only one standing, the only one breatheing...the only one left. I was part of an elite squad known as the Hazzards, we were the best of the best...we've seen alot of things that no ordinary man could see, Area 51, Ruins of Atlantis even proof of Mythological creatures. War looked like a fireing range compared to what we've had to kill. I hope at least one of my Team Members survived or at least some one with a working radio.

Chapter 1: The Hazzards

As I walked across the battle feild I thought I saw lights in the nearby forest just like the ones I saw on my first Mission, the Mission was simple get into the lab, elminate the threat and get out. We suceeded but the lab was underground and when we eliminated the threat there was a cave in lucky for us we had oxygen tanks and ammo, just incase the only way out was death. Then we say lights coming in from the pile of rocks blocking our way, they were almost too we were all unconcious...I was the last to black out but I saw the lights and the rocks been blown to bits.

The guys who rescued us were a team like ours, the Wolf Pack, they pulled us out of the fire before we got burned, I owe their leader alot...I may never see her again but at least the memories of her and everyone else I care about will keep me from going insane, I hope.

The lights got brighter and brighter soon I saw it was a Vehicle, it stopped next to me and the driver looked at me and said "Cole? Thank god we're glad to know you're O.K". It was my team, all of them survived and not a scratch on them, guess we our time to die is yet to come around but there's bad news...I was wrong when I said we had won the war...it had only just begun. Despite the bad news I had one question, where did Max get the Vehicle?

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Old 06-18-2010, 11:08 AM

Chapter 2: Project 791

As we were driving along the battle feild we got a message from our Commander.
"Hazzards do you read me? Hazzards I repeat do you read me?".
Max answered and said "Yes sir we read you, the team's fine but the army...they didn't make it...".
The radio was silent for a few seconds then the Commander spoke again "Your objective is to head to this location and retreive a stolen project from the enemey, you're our only hope at this moment" The radio went dead. "Alright guys we have our mission, we're going to steal something back, Magan, Elroy and Frenchie will distract the troops on the outside while Cole and I sneak behind and give them a broken spine".

Magan was the teams Tech Expert, despite having the biggest brain in the group he's also a pretty good shot. Elroy my twin brother, we both signed up on the same day and got put in the same team guess we're no supposed to be apart for too long he's the Teams expert marks man, he never misses you could give him the most in-accurate weapon ever and he could make every bullet hit the target. Frenchie, his real name is Remy, we call him Frenchie because he asked us to, we don't care what he wants us to call him as long as he keeps that plasma launcher pointed at the enemy and not us. Max my best friend, he's the teams master of Stealth, his laser knife could cleave a mans head off but he's not that violent, he was made leader of the team but he declined and told the Commander that team only needs the leadership of team work, so far so good I suppose, the commander agreed to Max's decision and every order directed to us comes from him.

Talking about my team made me remember, I forgot to say what I can do. Video game nerds called me a Gun Knight because I use a pistol and a sword that has a blade made of Electronite, a stone that projects a shape when light is projected onto it, but only if the light is from another stone called Illuminium, the blades hilt has Illuminium in a pattern that makes a shape of a sword. The sword can shut down any mechanical equipment, comes in handy when security bots are chasing you. The military call Gun Knights Electrodes, I per fer Electrode but Video game fans will still call me a gun knight.

As we arrived at the enemey base we found it had been already attacked, the enemey troops were running around searching for whoever or what ever tore a hole in the wall. Max looked at some data the Commander sent him and said "It says here our item is called Project 791, a bio experiment...it's a clone experiment, it's the D.N.A of the commander and his late wife...17 years it's been in it's tube, a Boy, named Ethan...guys this is the Commanders son and while they were checking on him one day they realised he started to develop telepathic powers and began to speak to everyone who came near him, that was when he was about 6...poor kid...hopefully he's still alive...".

I took out my Pistol and said "Only one way to find out...wait..." I looked and saw him...Ethan, holding a rifle in his hands and wearing soldiers jeans he took from one of the guards, apparently he knew he was kidnapped, standing behind him was one of the smartest minds the world has ever known, Jennifer Rose, 17, went missing a few weeks ago, guess Ethan heard how she got there and finally broke out of the Tube, killed the guards with his bare hands, grabbed the rifle and pants and blew a hole in the buildings wall.

We watched the fighting Ethan raised his hand as if pushing something and the troops went flying acorss the base, Elroy took aim with his Sniper Rifle and shot a soldier getting up, Ethan looked up at us and said something and Jen started running towards us, I ran down to meet her and said to her "The rest of my teams at the top of the, go quickly I'll help him".
The girl simply nodded and continued up to the team, I started to shoot the soldiers that aimed at me while Ethan was shooting the ones aiming at him, I took out my Electronite Sword and said "Ethan! Catch!" I tossed the sword to him and he caught it and activated it and looked at me for a split second and started to attack the Soldiers and within a minute they were all either dead by electric shock or bullet wounds.

Ethan gave my sword back and said "Thank you, is Jennifer ok?".
"She's fine, Ethan...I'm Colin Jerrymire, we're here to bring you back home".
"We?"Ethan asked.

"My team and I, Ethan keep that gun with you, you'll-WOAH!" Ethan pushed me against the wall telekineticaly and said "How do I know I can trust you? How do I know that your from the same Army my Fathre commands?".
"Ask him your self, Ethan!" Max said tossing a hand held radio to Ethan. The commanders voice spoke "It's ok Ethan...I'm here, you and Jennifer are safe, come on home son...". Ethan gave the radio back and said "I'm sorry Colin...forgive my mistake..." Ethan said helping me stand, the moon light could finally be seen as the clouds began to fade away.

Jen hugged Ethan as soon as he and I got back to the team, his face nearly went completly pink. Jen let go and said "Sorry Ethan...th...thanks for saving me...".
Ethan snapped out of it and said "You're welcome Jennifer".
"Alright Kids let's get moving" Frenchie said showing them the way to the vehicle. We all got in and Jen said "How far away is the base?".
Max started the engine and said "There is none, we're being picked up by a Helicopter, all we gotta do is keep an eye out for it.

We were driving for at least an hour when a Helicopter landed nearby and signaled us to move over to them. When we got to them we were surprised to see it was the team we now owe even more of a debt to...The Wolf Pack.

 


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