Hm, the way you wrote this, with the names before the sentences in the dialogue makes it more of a script of a play than a story/book. Same goes for things like (more time pass) - which should be passes ;) - and I don't really understand why you have questionmarks with brackets around them in the middle of sentences.
I also noticed several grammatical errors, like 'more time pass' instead of 'more time passes' and '[...]I might know that it is?' which should have been 'what it is'. The idea of the story could be interesting, but the way it's written gives very little details, a few sentences of 'Introduction', followed by a long dialogue with characters we do not know in a setting we do not know without any actual explanation of what is happening.
To give a small example:
Quote:
(???): “NO DEMONS IN THE VILLAGE OF ODD”
(Alex): “If I see any demons I’ll tell them not to go there.”
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That's written like the script for a play.
A story would me more along those lines:
"No demons in the village of Odd!" someone shouted.
"Well, if I see any demons, I will tell them not to go there," Alex replied.
Usually, there would have been more description there, too. Maybe a description of their surroundings, the thoughts of one of the characters, the way they acted.
It might be an interesting plot, though. I can't really judge it, however, because it is currently difficult to follow: little to no background information and mostly dialogue between an unknown character and a character with amnesia.