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10-01-2010, 07:43 PM
Hey! I’m Ashley! I have THE most amazing boyfriend! He’s perfect for me! How I got him? Not such a perfect story, but ill tell you anyway:
It started at an end of year party at our school. It was a Friday night, and there was officially one more week of school left. Almost everyone was tipsy, and there was a large quantity who were drunk. Me and my best friends Paige, Alice, Ellie and Lizzy were sitting in a circle, with some hotties from our school. We were, as it is, about to play 7 minutes in heaven. And that’s where it all started.
The bottle spun round, and it landed on Alice & Mateus. They went off. Seven minutes later they came back, looking slightly flushed. Then the bottle landed again. Me and Tom. He grinned, before taking my hand and dragging me top speed towards one of the empty classrooms. As soon as the door was closed he kissed me. Wow. He moved me up against the wall, and deepened the kiss. Our mouths opened and our tongues intertwined. I lifted my legs from the floor, and wrapped them around his waist, making him press closer to me, but before we could go any further there was a knock on the door.
‘Time’s up!’ yelled someone.
‘Fuck off.’ I mumbled, kissing Tom again. He grinned and kissed me, and then the person barged in.
His eyes widened as he saw me pressed against the wall.
‘Erm... You have to get out, others wanna go in…’ he stuttered. I unwrapped my legs from around Tom, and placed them gently on the floor. Tom took his hands away, but took hold of my hand, and smiled sweetly at me. I went onto my tip-toes and planted a short kiss on his lips.
We walked back to the others hand in hand. On the way we met Lizzy and John-Roy going to the classroom. Lizzy winked at me as we went by, and JR (our nickname for John-Roy) grinned at Tom.
I sat down with Tom next to the others, and smiled, content. Tom got out a pen from his pocket and wrote his number on my arm. He them put his arm around me, and I rested my head on his chest.
The rest of the day, went by in a blur. The only thing I can remember is spending it with Tom.
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10-01-2010, 07:51 PM
wOOOOOO! <3
gimmie the restt! nowww <333 xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Hala-Ikira
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10-02-2010, 05:48 PM
ahaaa, it sucks at how much i have to cut outt :L x
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10-02-2010, 05:51 PM
i had to aswell, have a look at my complications and condemnations one, :L xxxxx
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Half-Moon
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10-03-2010, 08:15 AM
I really enjoyed reading this :D
Simple teenage love stories <3 The only type of romance I'll ever read xD
I don't mean to sound like I'm dissing your story - I completely loved it - but when you update will you tell us how the characters look? :D At the moment I'm imagining Ashley has a similar appearance to your avatar xD;
<3333333333333333333333333333333 LOVED IT GIRL! <3
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Hala-Ikira
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10-03-2010, 10:33 AM
okayy thankss :D x
completley forgot about that! xD x
i'm gonna write more soon ;D x
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10-03-2010, 11:56 AM
ooh, excellent~!
I'm looking forward to it <33
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Hala-Ikira
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10-04-2010, 07:37 PM
this is a story i wrote like 3 years ago :) x
i finished it, but the site i had posted the story on got deleted, so i only have the beggining x
Enjoy :) x
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CHAPTER 1
I opened my eyes and stared at them, the three men who had dumped me in this small dark room were staring back at me behind the glass wall. I hated everything about them. They cringed at me. I had had enough. first they had kidnapped me while I was on my way to my wedding, then they had left me in this dark room where I got bitten by something, - I cringed at the pain that it had been pulsing through my body for the part three days. It was like fire, ripping and burning every cell of my body - and now they were staring at me like they didn’t know what was happening! I crouched and sprang, feeling my inhuman strength as I flew up into the air. Then I slammed my hands into the hard unbreakable metal of the wall and crushed it with my force. I started climbing up the glass they were staring behind, a terrified expression on all their faces. As I reached the glass, I looked at my reflection. I was beautiful. My skin looked soft and like marble at the same time and my features were beautiful. My brown hair looked soft and really well taken care of (even after three days of not doing anything with it). I looked dazzling. I was about to thank the men who had captured me and made me look like this, even after all they had done to me. But then I looked at my eyes – they were a blood red instead of my emerald green that I had loved, and that had been the beat feature on my face before. A snarl broke through my lips and I and punched the glass. It shattered easily. I inhaled through my nose, the burning desire of food scorched my throat, they smelled delicious.
‘Lunch time’ I said. My voice sounded like a choir of angels singing. But I has put the right amount of venom in my tone and made it sound deadly. They stared wide eyed at me and cringed away. Then I lunged at the closest man, who was frozen on the spot.
‘No!’ he finally yelled when I was centimeters away from him. I bit into his neck and felt his warm blood running down my throat, satisfying only a small part of my thirst. When his body was drained and lifeless, I threw his carcass to the side and advanced toward the second man, who still hadn’t gotten over all the shock. He was as easy to kill as the first one, as was the third. When I had drained the blood of the last man the door creaked open slowly. Then a face looked through. I dropped the body I was holding and stood up. It was him. My fiancée, and I had never realized that he was different from the other humans. I was like him now, whatever we were. I took a small step forward, and then I bounded into his arms.
‘What am I?’ I asked, panic in my voice.
‘You’re a vampire, love.’ He replied softly holding me closer to him. So I was a vampire. Wow. I pulled back and looked into his eyes to see if he was fooling me, but something else caught my attention. His eyes were not the same color as mine; they were a beautiful honey brown. I gasped slightly and pulled my lips to his. He kissed me back automatically but pulled away after a short while. I looked at him confused, so he smiled his one of a kind perfect smile.
‘You’re stronger than me at the moment.’ He replied still smiling. Then I understood. I had hurt him. I giggled and it sounded like bells ringing. ‘I want to introduce you to someone, He’s called Carlisle. He’ll explain to you exactly what’s happened.’ He said. He took my hand and together we ran to him.
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CHAPTER 2; DESCRIPTION
It was while we were running I studied Joes – my fiancées – features. He had black hair which was messily shaped to the back, from running probably, and he was taller than me – something he had always been, even during my growth spurt a couple of years ago. – By about 10 centimeters, which I liked. I had always liked my men taller than me. Then Joe looked at me
‘I love you Ashley.’ He said smiling his perfect smile. He only ever smiled that smile when we were alone, as I remembered from my dim human memories.
‘I love you too.’ I said smiling back.
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CHAPTER 3; THE MEET
When we got to a big white house; Carlisle’s house, I spotted another vampire. Her brown hair was cut in a pixie sort of style and she was quite short. Other than that, she has the beautiful features of our kind. Then I realized she was sitting outside like that as if she had been expecting us all along. Weird. Had Joe said something to her? She jumped lightly down the porch and glided towards us.
‘Hello, my name is Alice Cullen. Its so nice to finally see you without having to use my vision.’ She said smiling. This confused me. Vision? She knew me? WHAT?
‘Come inside! Everyone’s so excited to meet you!’ she squealed.
As soon as we walked into the house we were greeted by 6 other vampires. One of them stepped forward.
'hello, my name is Carlisle.' he turned and began to point out everyone in his family. “ This is Rosalie.” he said pointing to the blonde beautiful girl. I smiled at her. He continued to point the rest out. The other girl, who was pixie like, thin and had dark spiky hair pointing in different directions was Alice. Her mate, a honey blonde male whose name was Jasper. Then came the muscular, dark curly haired male, Emmett who grinned at me and made me laugh in response. Esme was the next person Carlisle introduced me to. Then finally I was introduced to Edward, and his mate Bella. Edward was deffiatly the sexiest of them all. Yum.
'Thank you!' Edward said laughing. i stared at him.
'did i say that out loud?' i asked
'No, i have a gift. you see, some vampires are trackers, while some have special abilities. take me for example, i can read minds. Alice can see the future, jasper who can control emotions, bella who is a shield, and remesmee who is so extrodenary that there is no name for her ability.' edward finished.
'renesmee?' i asked.
'she is mine and edwards daughter. Shes out hunting with Jacob.'
'oh.' i said
We all ended up sitting in the living room chatting quietly to eachother. I was talking to Edward when Jasper very nearly yelled,
'How do you do it!? First bella and now you!' He said frantically.
'what?' i asked, panick and confusion taking over my emotions.
'your a newborn vampire and your acting like youve already lived decades or even centuaries!' He said fustrated.
'Oh.' was all i could say. Then i shrugged answering his question. Then Esme asked,
'So what exactly happend to you and how did you get changed? If you dont want to talk about it you dont have to, im just curious.' The room fell silent and i glanced to see 9 pairs of vampire eyes look at me. i took a deep breath and started my story
' i was on my way to my wedding, and i was feeling slightly sick beause my mom has been irritating me for days long about getting married at a young age, 'married at 17! whats the rush?' ' i mimicked in her voice. 'i kept telling her i was ready, and that i didnt want anybody else but she woulnt listen. So i hadnt been eating anything. I had to get out of the car and get something to eat and the closest place was a gas station. i didnt like it, but i had no other choise; i was starving. So i got out of my limosine in my wedding dress' i smiled at the dim image, and edward smiled with me, seeing the pictures in my head. ' and i made my way to the small shop which was selling sandwiches and small snacks. Then i saw these three men...' my voice trailed off and i growled.
'what happend after that?' Edward asked. he was intent on knowing the whole story as he could see all the images in my head and found them all fascinating.
'they came streight upto me, they has beer with them and looked drunk. two of the men were smoking and one had a syringe in his hand.' Edward and i winced in syncronism, and i touched a place on my throat with the tip of my finger. 'the man stabbed me, and everything went blurry. Then it went black and i passed out. I woke up a while later in a room filled with creatures and one bit me. Then the fire began. It lasted a couple of days until it died down and when i was finally able to move i felt my inhuman strength. Afterwards Joe found me killing the last of the three men. We came to you immidiatly after that.'
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CHAPTER 4; GIFT
Everybody was still sitting in the exact same positions as they has been 89.4 seconds ago. They were all bewildered with my story.
'I randomly feel like turning invisible' i said randomly, breaking the silence. Then i heard gasps all around me. i turned and saw everybody stare in my direction. 'what?' i asked
'Well Ash, You kinda are invisible.' Joe said slowly. Now it was my turn to be bewildered; i couldnt say anything. Then i smiled hugely. I had a gift!
'I can feel Bellas shield.' i said leaning closer towards her.
'Brilliant! Nice thinking carlisle.' Edward said.
'what is it?' I asked curiously.
'Well i think you could probably take her shield away. Try pulling her shield away. It might not work but you can try.' Carlisle said. So i tried and it worked! I could feel bellas shield slipping off and then it came off altogether.
'fascinating.' Edward said bewildered, 'i can hear her thoughts.' he smiled. Bella looked pissed off.
'give me my shield back.' she hissed. We all laughed especially Emmett, Joe and I. I gave her back her shield still laughing and turned visible again. I had been wrong before, NOW she looked pissed off.
'hmph.' she said before she stood up and stalked out of the room. We all stopped laughing but Emmett and i kept huge grins on our faces. Then Edward sighed and stood up to follow Bella.
'Dont go, she wants the attention. she has no reason to be annoyed, i was just trying something. and its not like her shields damaged or anything.' i said to him. he thought about it for 7.6 seconds before he sat down again. Soon enough bella came and went straight to edward.
'you didnt come.' she whispered furiously to him. he shrugged,
'you had no reason and still dont have one to be annoyed with Ashley.' He said. He mouth popped open in a perfect 'O' shape and snapped it shut 2.8 seconds later to glare at me. I grinned wider. She didnt scare me! Edward Laughed and bella shot him a deadly look.
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CHAPTER 5; FAMILY
Joe and i had been at the Cullens house for about 15 hours and i could tell Joe was getting restless.
'I think we'll go now. You probably want some time to yourselves.' i said.
'NO!' Alice said jumping up. 'Youre living with us now. I can see you have no place to live and will have a hard tie finding a place to stay. And i can also see Carlisle and Esme wanting you to live here and i think everybody else does too right?' She said turning and smiling to her family.
'Of course we want you here. We wouldnt want you to live anywhere else.' Esme said. I smiled. Esme was the sweetest person i know!
'Thank you Esme. that means aslot to me.'
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Sizzla
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10-05-2010, 05:41 PM
((Hi Hala. :D We prefer that you only make one thread for short stories in Lit Spot, so I'm going to merge the two threads you created into one. You can post all your short stories in this thread from now on. :yes:))
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10-06-2010, 12:38 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sizzla
((Hi Hala. :D We prefer that you only make one thread for short stories in Lit Spot, so I'm going to merge the two threads you created into one. You can post all your short stories in this thread from now on. :yes:))
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My two stories ae completely different. also, one of my stories are over 100 pages on paper, that's why I pOsted them separately. thanks :) x
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Btw, this is my friends avatar, But it's actually Hala-ikira x
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