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Old 01-02-2011, 09:13 PM

Hello! Thank you for clicking my topic. I'm going to be writing a story here. It's my first story, so I hope it does well. I'm only going to write a paragraph or so at a time. If there are people wanting the next paragraph, let me know you're reading, by posting something like "more! (:". If I have to leave during story writing, I'll post letting you all know. (: Enjoy!


I yawned as I slowly woke up from that wonderful dream I had. I was with Jared, the most popular guy in school, I lived in a beautiful home, my parents were wonderful and my family had dinner together every night at the dining room table. Unfortunately, that's not how my life was...

"Mary!" My dad shouted. "Get your buns down here and eat breakfast!".
I tiredly walked like a zombie to the kitchen table. "Freezer burnt waffles again..?" I asked. "Well what do you expect? Caviar with lobster? Without your mother being here, we never have any decent food!" Dad said. "I just asked a question.." I mumbled. "What was that? Learn to shut your God damn mouth, Mary." Dad was drunk, again...

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Well, today being a Sunday, I decided to go out with one of my good friends, Olivia. She was pretty, had long dark hair, blue eyes and had a killer figure with all the right clothes to suit it. I text her, "Hey 'Live, wanna maybe hit the mall today?". As I waited for a reply, I threw on a pair of plain jeans, non-matching socks, my old converse and a Hollister shirt Olivia had given me for my birthday a few months ago. Beep! Beep! Beep! I checked my phone. It said "Yeah, sure, I actually have to talk to you about something. See you there ASAP." I then quickly brushed my teeth, did my hair and was out the door, not bothering to tell my passed out father where I went. Besides, he wouldn't even notice I was gone.


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Old 01-04-2011, 01:14 AM

Meh, whatever, I'll write more anyways. (:

I met Olivia at the mall infront of one of her favourite stores, Aeropostale. "Hey, so, what did you want to talk about?" I asked. "Well... Uhm..." She stuttered. "C'mon, tell me..?" I encouraged. "I'm sort of.. Well, actually I am, dating Jared now." She said, scared. "WHAT? Olivia, how could you do that?! You knew I liked him! Why would you do that to me?!" I screamed, not caring who saw. "I'm sorry Mary... Just, he liked me, not you..." She said. After that, I ran home, furious, angry, I don't even know how to explain it. When I got home, I saw my dad still passed out cold. I quickly ran to my messy room. I layed on my bed, crying, sobbing, wanting to just die. I hated her! Why would she do that? After about 30 minutes of "why me?! why me?! How could she do that?!" My phone beeped. It was from Jared! I looked at the text. It said "Hey, Mares, wanna come to my party 2nite? It starts at 9.".. I was shocked and extremely confused. I quickly text back, "Uhm, yeah sure. I'll be there.".

It was 8 o'clock, and I just got out of the shower. I couldn't decide whether to curl or straighten my hair. Olivia not being there to coach me on what I should do, I decided to go sleeky straight. I wanted to impress Jared. Make him wish he had me, and not... Her. My mom was gone, so I didn't think she'd mind if I borrowed her straightener. Hmm. Now what to wear. Still wishing Olivia was there to coach me, I went into my mom's closet. She has so many nice pieces of clothing... She has stuff, I don't exactly have. I took a look around in the closet, until my dad walked in. "Hey, Mary, I'm going to a friend's house, and I probably won't be back 'til tomorrow." And he was gone. Yes! I have no interruptions now. Now, where was I. Oh yes, In was looking through the closet. I saw a purple dress with silver buttons on the front. Pretty, but not enough to impress. Then, I came across this slinky, red cocktail dress. It was perfect! I looked down at the floor of the closet and and saw some black stilettos to match. I was ready.

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Old 01-08-2011, 09:09 PM

Omg, hey I did not know that you wrote books.... well this is a great please write more I like it

 



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